User talk:VexHecubus
Gday, ummm.. Neem is really informative, I feel smarter for having read this. I couldn't find how this relates to body modification as a whole. Did I miss something? Oh, but I didn't miss that this is a word for word copy of Welcome to neen foundation. Could you perhaps think about re-writing this? Thanks. Russgrue 23:05, 28 April 2006 (EDT)
Hello again. I was just reading Dead Sea Mineral Salts, and noticed that it looks like a word for word copy of DEAD SEA MINERAL BATH SALTS,500gr from the Dead Sea!! maybe it's just me. Russgrue 23:12, 28 April 2006 (EDT)
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Hi Russgrue
"Gday, ummm.. Neem is really informative, I feel smarter for having read this. I couldn't find how this relates to body modification as a whole. Did I miss something? Oh, but I didn't miss that this is a word for word copy of Welcome to neen foundation. Could you perhaps think about re-writing this? Thanks. Russgrue 23:05, 28 April 2006 (EDT)
Hello again. I was just reading Dead Sea Mineral Salts, and noticed that it looks like a word for word copy of DEAD SEA MINERAL BATH SALTS,500gr from the Dead Sea!! maybe it's just me. Russgrue 23:12, 28 April 2006 (EDT)"
Neem is used as a vegan alternative to Emu Oil. It's an Anti-Septic/Anti-Astringent/Anti-Inflammatory.
Check out BodyArtPro.Com and read up on their SimpleCare Aftercare Line. All the products pretty much contain Neem.
As for the re-writing. I'm going to consider going through it all, however I feel that if I re-write it...I won't be able to give off the proper educational material effectively. What I AM considering is also adding in a section that will describe WHY Neem and Dead Sea Mineral Salts are so effective for body modification.
Also the information on these subjects, both Neem and the Dead Sea Mineral Salts, are not copyrighted and have honestly been passed around freely. For example the eBay URL you provided is not where I got the information for the Wiki entry I made. I got it from a completely different site. The only thing I left out was the statement in the entry that included Dead Sea Mud, since the dead sea mud has no relevance to Body Modification.
Hi Again Russ
Gday, I see what you mean and I do agree you don't want to go too far to find the information you need. However even Emu Oil and Satin doesn't go into it's chemistry, botanical names and cultural importance. Do you know what I mean? Russgrue 21:22, 29 April 2006 (EDT)
I totally understand where you're coming from. I'm going to scan through the whole thing over and remove portions, I figured the majority of the information was useful. To make it hit home just how useful Neem is. Also I figured Botanical Names for Neem in various regions is rather important...As Neem isn't called Neem in various regions.
Also if you check out Techni-Care and other items that are similar...They too also cover the chemical makeup,etc.
But I definately know what you mean, and also partially agree.
Warren Hiller page
I did some basic copy editing and making sure links set up go to correct pages, and there are a number that aren't pages yet. I'm going to assume you (or someone) is creating them, so I left them (if not, they can easily be removed later), but I changed a couple things around. For instance, professionalism, I linked to the Professional page that might be there, since Professional is mentioned later.
[To see what I'm talking about after this point, hit edit:)]
To link to something in the wiki, unless it already has a redirect, typically it's singular (Apprentice instead of Apprentices). If you want it to link to apprentice but say apprentices, it's just apprentices (btw, a lot of the changes I made were just doing that so everything didn't have to be capitalized during the text, or changing Body Piercing to body piercing.
For IAM. Learning Piercings, I'm not sure if you want to write a wiki entry about that (which is what the link would go to now), or if you want to link to the forum page. If the latter, it's just IAM. Learning Piercings
-Phoenixxphyre
Thanks for the run through Phoenixxphyre. I'm still trying to fully get the hang of the Wiki.
I'm probably going to write a basic lil blurb about IAM. Learning Piercings, since a number of people online ask what it is(over on MySpace,etc cuz it's be mentioned a number of times)
Again thanks for the checking copy editing,etc :D
:)
You're welcome. Glad to help:) -PPhyre