Talk:Lukas Zpira

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"On his IAM page ("lukas zpira"), he writes the following statement: To be, and to appear what we are hybrid beings half organic matter, half manufactured product, mutants..."

I can't find that anywhere on his page... And however interesting a quote for Lukas might be, it I don't think it needs to be entirely in bold. Use bold to highlight a word or sentence, not an entire paragraph, it just doesn't look neat.

entry page 10 on his iam page ...

doesn't read like an encyclopedia entry

This entry sounds like an advertisement or hero-worship. I don't know how to make it sound more encyclopedia-ey, but I've given it a shot once. Needs to be addressed.